WWW : The mize en scene and the photo in general reminds me of rap also the lay out/colour scheme conveys with the rap genre. EBI : I agree with Farida, I may move my headline slightly because it's too close the month issue.
mr permaul very good www: great image and miss-en-scene. like the headline and masthead. ebi: experiment with colour saturation on image. move headline slightly. change some of the sell line font size/colours...MORE DRAFTS. 15
WWW: Great photo! Well edited, great masthead and font.
ReplyDeleteEBI: headline can be moved to the side slightly
WWW : The mize en scene and the photo in general reminds me of rap also the lay out/colour scheme conveys with the rap genre.
ReplyDeleteEBI : I agree with Farida, I may move my headline slightly because it's too close the month issue.
mr permaul
ReplyDeletevery good
www: great image and miss-en-scene. like the headline and masthead.
ebi: experiment with colour saturation on image. move headline slightly. change some of the sell line font size/colours...MORE DRAFTS.
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